Angel of Death

I like the way you write. This was a very dark poem but the creativity made it shine. When you read a poem you should be able to also read ...

Again another great chapter. Secrets Revealed By Comatose Lights Well, I am so happy to learn something about Mikhail. You've kept me really curious for a long time, which is ...

Ello Sam I was looking for something interesting to read and I have found it. Margot seems like the dark character that everyone loves to love vice versa. She seems ...

I'm giving you a new nickname. Today you are deemed King Wow because after each paragraph I couldn't saying Wow! Your descriptions are getting better and better. I decided to ...

Wow! I loved Twilight but you just bring another light to the dazzling Edward Cullen. You shed over him a shadowy veil of evil that is sometimes more refreshing than ...

A Fever I can't sweat So after reading the first installment "I said I'm tired and I'll read the rest later' but after wondering more about your lovely characters I ...

I apologize Jig. Really, I am entirely ashamed of myself. This story has been laying around here blind from my eyes and I did nothing about it. If you want, ...

This was so beautiful I can't even explain how magical this poem is. Wow. I didn't see any grammatical errors but I don't think you should change anything. It flowed ...

Hey Saint!! I really enjoyed this but it lacked some descriptions here and there. It was over too fast and I want more...oh well I guess I'll just have to ...

Hey Max!! This was beautiful and the title I really loved the title. Wow you made me cry because the emotions behind this were so real and I've been through ...

Hey Wojovox, I've been seeing you around here a lot and you critique wholly and you pretty don't care about being nice....you tell the truth so I'm going to do ...

Wow this was beautiful and entertaining. I have to say that your title really caught my eye which is always a big thumbs up when writing. Your characters were very ...

As always I am blown away by your poetry. You should really think about publishing a poetry book or something because you're amazing. Your poems are short but they are ...

Kylan is that you? Really seriously...you're back? Where have you been? OMG!! I haven't any of your work in a long long long time and...give me a minute...ok Poetry? Idealogical ...

Bravo, this was brilliant!! It's short but it sends a very strong message and it makes you think. I see no grammatical all in all I thought this was well ...